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The Longest Wait (Revised) (Free verse) by Caducus
A plastic tube in oval claret,
Your fate lays in a monotone beep.
A green line flickers,
and hopes rest in uncertain waves,
that have become your bedside beacon.
I sing your favourite love song,
hoping that you'll hear me,
sometimes I forget the words,
then realize I've just sang them subconsciously.
As you flounder in pale shade,
I scowl at the vibrant bouquets,
that flourish in your decline,
as fates cruel hand awaits its Croupier.
Fate is a horizontal line,
The illuminated split of jade upon black,
Time is recorded by impervious staff,
Who destroy the remnants of her in sheets,
The bed is made for another,
And I leave silently to silence.
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