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Did You Notice? (Free verse) by Bonehiss
Did you notice The last stir of the light, Fleeing the shadow Of hopeless finality Creeping toward my heart, And the silence, As you turned again To stone cold idol, Guarding the secret haunt Of bygone lovers, And their secret dreams, Abandoned In the dark night Of your soul? Did you notice The raging sun Of a fearful new dawn, Burning on the horizon, Silent witness to the carnage Of endless days to come? Did you notice My savage passing? Drawn against life’s current Into Hell’s eternity, A casualty of your own cruel nature. Did you notice?

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