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When she beats me (Free verse) by Win
I never see it coming
Her fisted hands are
quicker than lightning
more relentless than a raging flood
And all the while
she smiles a smile
so stunningly radiant
it amazes me
In that moment, she is as beautiful and powerful as any goddess
In that moment she is wild and free
And I rejoice,
for I know then that she does love me
but the yearnings of her heart
come quicker to her hand
than to her lips
I rejoice,
and I wait for the day when she too will know,
beyond a shadow of doubt,
that I do love her,
beatings and all
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