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the abandoned sea (Free verse) by crin
you walked away without breaking the surface
every movement you made seemed so close to perfect
so what is it that you left behind
you dipped your head and cursed the wind
looked back at your footprints disappearing in the sand
and turned away
so what is it that you left behind
you said you thought there were too many stars
and not enough wishes to take away the scars
did you endure so much
that you had to leave
did you endure so much
that you now deny
so what is it that you left behind
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