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making progress (a piece of it) (Lyric) by Limness
since you've left i think much too often i feel the real beginning to soften invisible since my light has gone but things have changed it followed you down they're all rearranged it followed you down unbrushed unshaved unbathed unmade you were the one you were the one my time is neat my room is long i'm on my feet and you were wrong

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