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West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) (Free verse) by wilco
I guess this means you were right
about the sands of California.
You dreamed of gulls and bright blue skies
and I guess this means you were right.
You always said that I wouldn't come
and I hope its as beautiful as you hoped.
I guess this means you were right
about a the sands of California.
I guess this means you were right
about the sands of California.
You always said that I was a fool to stay
and I guess this means you were right.
The peaceful grace of a west coast promenade
must have kept your heart enthralled.
I guess this means you were right
about the sands of California.
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