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West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) (Free verse) by wilco
I guess this means you were right about the sands of California. You dreamed of gulls and bright blue skies and I guess this means you were right. You always said that I wouldn't come and I hope its as beautiful as you hoped. I guess this means you were right about a the sands of California. I guess this means you were right about the sands of California. You always said that I was a fool to stay and I guess this means you were right. The peaceful grace of a west coast promenade must have kept your heart enthralled. I guess this means you were right about the sands of California.

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