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waiting for you (Free verse) by New Life Drug
here we come crashing down souls just falling into the ground maybe its the end of us but we're like that movie we're Kill Bill 2 and waiting for our final scene but it wont compare to anything i've seen so far i've just been waiting where will it end? please tell me how more simple can it be? the title explains it all but at the same time tells me nothing exactly like the title 'me and you' two shadows as one but you never say a word and I never ask I only say it in my heart that we can never be apart although it's evident in where we rest the beats that emerge within our chest i'm pushing myself off the edge if you dont come get me now but i've been feeling this all along i've been remembering your song all it does is reassure you want me, and you can't hide it even though you try I figure you out every time I know the best of you and that's something that will never change its impossible to forget it i've tried you've tried there is no way out the only way is to go back in so while you take your steps slow as a slug i'll be watching the moon i'll be waiting for you

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