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Cursed thoughts entering this open mind (Free verse) by DrinkYouAway
Cursed thoughts entering this open mind Singled out for truly a feeling exists Love for another has conquered me And confusion is left to devour my feelings You resemble such beauty on this incredible night A smile that is owned by only one kind A woman? Only beauty such as this contains me Still I walk down streets of turmoil Holding hands with our enemy Giving myself to him just to please society.. Everyone objects to the one I hold dearest true My heart goes on while my hand is loyally next to him Keep this love affair ours only! Thine eyes fall for such a lie be phony Allow true feelings speak, through the movements of your lips, On mine Scream this to the world after all be gone For we shall not exist as a lie, But a love to be never forgotten.

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Down the ladder: February 22, 2004

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8650
Posted: April 29, 2004 5:36 PM PDT; Last modified: April 29, 2004 5:36 PM PDT
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