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Cursed thoughts entering this open mind (Free verse) by DrinkYouAway
Cursed thoughts entering this open mind
Singled out for truly a feeling exists
Love for another has conquered me
And confusion is left to devour my feelings
You resemble such beauty on this incredible night
A smile that is owned by only one kind
A woman?
Only beauty such as this contains me
Still I walk down streets of turmoil
Holding hands with our enemy
Giving myself to him just to please society..
Everyone objects to the one I hold dearest true
My heart goes on while my hand is loyally next to him
Keep this love affair ours only!
Thine eyes fall for such a lie be phony
Allow true feelings speak,
through the movements of your lips, On mine
Scream this to the world after all be gone
For we shall not exist as a lie,
But a love to be never forgotten.
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Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8591
Posted: April 29, 2004 5:36 PM PDT; Last modified: April 29, 2004 5:36 PM PDT
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