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Juno's Peacock (Free verse) by horus8
I woke up today, and I looked for you. I stumbled blinded by the sun out into the garden. I spoke nothing. I had less. I knew only that you had left something painfully wrong in my head, a beautiful imperfection. A mosaic of tiny infinite heavens... An epic tragedy. Where, and when I find you, will be entirely up to me, and this time - - it's personal.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4545455
Weighted score: 6.2272725
Overall Rank: 950
Posted: April 26, 2004 7:15 PM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2004 7:15 PM PDT
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[8] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 26-Apr-04/7:42 PM | Reply
Nice. But what is A mosaic of tiny infinite heavens?
[n/a] horus8 @ 66.229.187.185 > deleted user | 26-Apr-04/7:46 PM | Reply
Uranus.
[8] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 > horus8 | 26-Apr-04/7:48 PM | Reply
You are toying with my brain, admittedly a plaything sometimes.
[9] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 26-Apr-04/7:51 PM | Reply
Art Noir. Reminded of those private eye stories.

strong.
[n/a] horus8 @ 66.229.187.185 > Shuushin | 28-Apr-04/11:58 PM | Reply
Ferociously Homosexual and trying too...
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