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Free verse № 99018

Juno's Peacock

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Apr 2004 · 5 comments

I woke up today, and I looked for you. I stumbled blinded by the sun out into the garden. I spoke nothing. I had less. I knew only that you had left something painfully wrong in my head, a beautiful imperfection. A mosaic of tiny infinite heavens... An epic tragedy. Where, and when I find you, will be entirely up to me, and this time - - it's personal.

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[8] deleted user 26-Apr-04/7:42 PM Reply
Nice. But what is A mosaic of tiny infinite heavens?
[n/a] horus8 › deleted user 26-Apr-04/7:46 PM Reply
Uranus.
[8] deleted user › horus8 26-Apr-04/7:48 PM Reply
You are toying with my brain, admittedly a plaything sometimes.
[9] Shuushin 26-Apr-04/7:51 PM Reply
Art Noir. Reminded of those private eye stories.

strong.
[n/a] horus8 › Shuushin 28-Apr-04/11:58 PM Reply
Ferociously Homosexual and trying too...