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D.I.V.O.R.C.E.

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Apr 2004 · 3 comments

D is for the darkness that covers my broken home I is for the insults that they scream so loud V is for the versions of the story that I'm told O is for the options that no longer seem to exist R is for the reality that I wish would go away C is the comfort that I lost because of this E is for the ending which I wish I'd never know And D.I.V.O.R.C.E. is for the hatred, which is all I have been shown.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Apr-04/3:08 PM Reply

I thought this was going to be the pilot of a TV series about a crack team of secret agents who burst into meth labs in the middle of the night and adminster instant divorces to all the evildoers inside. I was wildly excited for a brief, sodden moment.

[6] zodiac › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Apr-04/7:57 PM Reply

It could be Detective Ironshoe's Vast Organization of Roving Crack Enforcers.

[7] deleted user 26-Apr-04/6:58 PM Reply

I think you have too many "that" s. I'd dump them from:
insults that they
story that I'm
reality that I wish
comfort that I lost
and the "which" from: ending which I wish
options that no longer seem to exist ->options no longer existing
the hatred, which is all -> the hatred and
Good stuff though. I feel it.