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When feeling has been lost... (Free verse) by philn
Behold this crimson night
It's 451 Farenheit
Burn your bridges, burn each page
They've earned respect reflecting rage
Now raise your gaze into the sky
These flames are crawling up so high
To touch the heavens, touch the stars
And avenge the stench of branding scars
Then heaven's hosts all shook their heads
And seraphs wept from heaven's beds
As aspirations to be kings
Made fallen angels clip their wings
And may this pride each day restore
The joys of bittersweet remorse
For all who trod this earthen vale
Will soon be silent, low, and pale.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2540
Posted: April 22, 2004 5:55 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2004 5:57 PM PDT
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