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eva (Free verse) by samgon i want to take a pen
and draw a line
along the length of your body
absorbing every curve,
outlining all of your beauty,
and making your topography mine.
i want to draw paths
and explore
all the far reaches of your existence,
drawing borders with my line
only to go beyond them
in a search for your secrets.
i want to know all the truth
that your body holds.
Up the ladder:
limits
Down the ladder:
you may find yourself here
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Posted: April 21, 2004 3:46 PM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2004 3:46 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6751 Comments:
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richa @ 81.178.249.235
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21-Apr-04/3:51 PM
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make your topography mine? Is that from the geographer's book of seduction.
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Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53
> richa
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22-Apr-04/7:36 AM
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I want a brail shirt that says "You're Making Me Horny"
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wilco @ 24.176.102.131
> Shuushin
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10-May-04/7:57 PM
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genius. you should market that.
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