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Free verse № 98030

eva

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Apr 2004 · 3 comments

i want to take a pen and draw a line along the length of your body absorbing every curve, outlining all of your beauty, and making your topography mine. i want to draw paths and explore all the far reaches of your existence, drawing borders with my line only to go beyond them in a search for your secrets. i want to know all the truth that your body holds.

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[7] richa 21-Apr-04/3:51 PM Reply
make your topography mine? Is that from the geographer's book of seduction.
[n/a] Shuushin › richa 22-Apr-04/7:36 AM Reply
I want a brail shirt that says "You're Making Me Horny"
[7] wilco › Shuushin 10-May-04/7:57 PM Reply
genius. you should market that.