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Snow (Free verse) by no9schmack
I pass by and notice the white tops
The faithful wind blowing you into place
Where will you land? Shall it be a tree branch,
A bush, or maybe just the ground.
I stand looking out a window
Wanting to be moistened
By your ever sweet innocence and caring nature
But just as you came from the sky
Falling impatiently down.
I am unable to be there,
Whether it be me, or whether it be you
Unable to come to me. We meet not.
My desire to be with you increases.
As your appearance builds up around me
Unable to play in your beauty
For just as I go to sleep seeing you there
By morning you will have passed.
Never have I a chance to embrace
Your sweet cool love nor to
Feel the texture of your heart.
For at the end I can say I am thankful
To have seen you through the window
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.462117
Overall Rank: 12874
Posted: August 18, 2002 8:07 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2002 7:57 AM PDT
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