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LONG LONG WAY TO GO (Free verse) by adrenalize
Like the darkness that has no dawn
The sound of silence that goes on
Wondering if I am actually here
Or if this is just another nightmare
The look on your face says it all
Never thought that I could ever fall
You say u want to be free
And I doubt whether we were ever meant to be
I guess you finally saw the light
Your ray of sunshine after the long, cold night
Don???t know what to say
The deafening silence as u begin to walk away
Leaving your trail of tears behind
Turns out true love really is blind
Where my road takes me now I don???t know
But I have a Long, Long Way to go
Adrenalize
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.462117
Overall Rank: 12875
Posted: September 17, 2002 8:02 AM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 8:02 AM PDT
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