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liquid love

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

Each day I pray that you will stay and show me that you care. Am I a fool to put my trust into a dude like you? I cry and I sigh and I realize, that my future can be bright with out you. You seem to stare and act like you don't care when times get rough and hard. What does it matter to me you ask, but it matters when I don't give you a piece of ass. My love is good, my love is great, why can't times be like our first day. Rememeber the excitement and the joy, after all of this time first dates aren't fare. first dates set you up to make you think everything is okay, but its never that way. You know Im still gonna shine..whether or not you are mine... love oh love......its what we make it........

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[0] poetandknowit 18-Aug-02/10:10 PM Reply
hahaha!!! Did your parents drop you off at the mall for this date? I cried when I read this; I really did. It touched me in ways that I cannot even explain.