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03/30/04 (Free verse) by Lifeboatman
Dear Diary,
Your counsel is like brandy I haven't drank
Your experiences are but blotted reflections of mine
And your memories dictated by my grammar
Your advices are spitted forth by my pen
The comfort you give are defined by my handstrokes
Your hatred is a weak confession when I start to write them down
And what of love? But an echo of my first kiss
And see how you easily fold around the corners
The only thing we have in common is emptiness
Dear Diary,
Understanding you is death
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Weighted score: 5.0768404
Overall Rank: 6512
Posted: April 19, 2004 3:28 AM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2004 3:28 AM PDT
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