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humans (Free verse) by TheLegacy
we are stuck
shuffled into the fold
of humans being human beings
we suck our lives through the lives of others, less advanced than we
forced to bide our time
watching watches tick past ticks etched
in the waiting room of existence
stand, we, on edges of profundity,
those of us who strive to progress,
and rabidly fight against the mass to evolve
from homo erectus
to homo sapien
to homo spiritualis
and beyond
we cry for more than just to exist
we ache to be
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9956
Posted: April 12, 2004 11:42 PM PDT; Last modified: April 12, 2004 11:42 PM PDT
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