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starry (Free verse) by the indign
When the stars being to fade From your pretty eyes I see Let's fall together In eachother's arms Maybe we'll discover Our deepest purest charms I say hello one eveing gray Into the starry night The petals of the freshest flowers Begin to take flight Maybe we'll discover Those precious wishes out of sight Until one day I held your hand You'd hold mine so tight Someone once wished me well And I scurried far away from sight Maybe we'll discover A secret better way But I hope unto you I'll see a finer day Than those forgotten times we shared When love was in our heart Maybe we'll discover A new and brighter start Take care my love Don't lose that wintry smile So many doors that lie before you They call out to you Maybe we'll discover The truth Until that day I'll hold your hand Into that starry night We'll run forever together With love beaming from our heart Perhaps we'll do this together Within a new and brighter day

Up the ladder: midnight feast
Down the ladder: mary

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7283
Posted: April 8, 2004 8:04 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2004 8:04 PM PDT
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