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searching (Free verse) by francis nor capule
though we have never met... never seen each other eye to eye, your presence fills me. and i just have to smile... to forget , everything that has ever been wrong in my life, to once more hope, and be all right and when i find you, i hope soon. i won't promise the stars or the moon. only myself forever true, to be held by you, undoubtedly you... i know you're out there somewhere, somehow , someplace hope i go to all the right places know the right people till finally , i could look you in the eye...

Up the ladder: Over beast
Down the ladder: Close To You

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11262
Posted: March 29, 2004 8:36 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2005 8:43 PM PST
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[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 29-Mar-04/5:19 PM | Reply
"i won't promise the stars [OR]the moon" - this is a common mistake.

Its a nice sentiment.
[n/a] francis nor capule @ 210.23.227.51 > Shuushin | 30-Mar-04/5:56 AM | Reply
ei thanks... i wont edit though, coz if i do the rankings would reset...: )
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