Poemranker [Poem: untitled rhyme royal 2] [by starkfister] Wed May 08 06:25:08 PDT 2024

untitled rhyme royal 2 (Other) by starkfister

I have heard it told of a valley filled with moss That is known the world over as the most soft When I am gone from its shade I feel a loss So I am known to visit there oft Standing tall with my head aloft I stop and drink from a stream Whose golden warmth is my dream

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Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11271

Posted: September 22, 2005 1:38 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2005 1:38 PM PDT
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[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.251.165 | 23-Sep-05/3:58 PM | Reply

Ow. That's terrible. If you're going to use old-fashioned language, do it well.

Aside from that, an excellent first-person narrative of a dwarf performing cunnilingus on a grown woman. 8070F000

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