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searching (Free verse) by francis nor capule

though we have never met... never seen each other eye to eye, your presence fills me. and i just have to smile... to forget , everything that has ever been wrong in my life, to once more hope, and be all right and when i find you, i hope soon. i won't promise the stars or the moon. only myself forever true, to be held by you, undoubtedly you... i know you're out there somewhere, somehow , someplace hope i go to all the right places know the right people till finally , i could look you in the eye...

Shuushin 29-Mar-04/5:19 PM
"i won't promise the stars [OR]the moon" - this is a common mistake.

Its a nice sentiment.




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