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hidden (Free verse) by the indign
do you feel it?
shh, whisper softly
don't scare it away
a soft, a hush, a not quite there
but yet so present, full, complete
do you hear it?
silently making its way
passing through, passing by
reaching out to you
do you sense it?
it's almost there, it wants you
wants you to know it's there
yet hiding, it's scared
quiet now, don't frighten it away
it seems so peaceful
it just wants to play, just a little
do you see it?
it's holding out its hand
quick, before it fades away, grasp it
hold onto it and share it
so quiet, so soothing
oh, it's leaving
where's it going?
wait, wait, it's rushing
quickly, follow, let's follow
i think it wants to show you
yes, it's leading us there
hold on, you don't want to fall past
there...there it is...
oh....
it's so beautiful....
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2556
Posted: March 26, 2004 8:14 PM PST; Last modified: March 26, 2004 8:14 PM PST
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