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Free verse № 95156

a person

by francis nor capule

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Mar 2004 · Edited 11 Jun 2004 · 11 comments

in your heart you will see, a person that is for you to keep... and cherish for the rest of your life. someone who's always there, never busy, never away. who will put you on a pedestal; the right place for you to be. and when you're together, the world would stop, stars shall fall; time would stand still , and you would feel your heart beat . though far apart and doubts , questions, should arise... that person would keep you in their heart, mind and soul. questions would be answered, doubt erased. and love floweth, like mountain springs.

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11 comments

[7] Shuushin 26-Mar-04/3:07 PM Reply
yep. its a love poem.
[10] fuzzylogicisatwat 27-Mar-04/12:50 AM Reply
A bearded unicorn's buttock wipe of a love poem!
[6] zodiac 27-Mar-04/10:00 AM Reply
"13) Looking at porn helps you start to believe the lies it promotes. Examples lies include:

* Sexual freedom = happiness
* Perverted sex is more enjoyable than "normal" heterosexual sex (homosexual sex, incest, BDSM, etc)
* There are no consequences to sexual promiscuity
* Sexual expression is a right, not a God-given or God-defined gift
* You can live a healthy life with the porn images floating around in your mind
* Porn doesn't harm anyone
* Sex is something to be done primarily for self gratification
* The porn stars are the happiest people on earth
* Adults can view porn without any lasting side effects
* Porn will help your sex life
* Porn is just a harmless thing that every man looks at"
[n/a] francis nor capule › zodiac 29-Mar-04/8:56 AM Reply
"13) Looking at porn helps you start to believe the lies it promotes. Examples lies include:

* Sexual freedom = happiness
* Perverted sex is more enjoyable than "normal" heterosexual sex (homosexual sex, incest, BDSM, etc)
* There are no consequences to sexual promiscuity
* Sexual expression is a right, not a God-given or God-defined gift
* You can live a healthy life with the porn images floating around in your mind
* Porn doesn't harm anyone
* Sex is something to be done primarily for self gratification
* The porn stars are the happiest people on earth
* Adults can view porn without any lasting side effects
* Porn will help your sex life
* Porn is just a harmless thing that every man looks at"


yeah... i always fantasized to be a porn star ... but if there was any hint to my poem being pornographic... anyways, what made this so sensual???
[6] zodiac › francis nor capule 29-Mar-04/9:01 AM Reply
What do you think?
[n/a] francis nor capule › zodiac 29-Mar-04/12:03 PM Reply
seriously, no references IMHO to pornography or such. sigh, sometimes, people just have to take things at face value... this is a simple "i am looking for ms right but wouldn't be finding her" poem : P no contexts... specially to porn... which i detest, coz i believe it really kills romance. my two cents.
[6] zodiac › francis nor capule 29-Mar-04/12:21 PM Reply
Consider it this way: 27.5 million Americans visited internet porn websites in January 2002, or roughly 10% of the U.S. population. Other studies put that number as high as 20% (and 37% of males). In one study, almost 18% of the respondents who identified themselves as Christian admitted to internet porn viewing. It is not unreasonable to guess that 5-10 of the 50 poemranker users to log on since I posted that message are internet pornsters, a figure which is likely on the low side considering that all poemranker users are already internet users (barring, of course, that we're all poets here and sensitive ones at that.)

Naturally, I wouldn't want to post quotes from porn-addiction-Christian-ministry sites on the poems of posters whom I considered most likely to be porn-users. That would only drive them deeper into depravity, leading to homosexuality, bestiality, evil spirits, or masturbation. So I decided to post porn-addiction-Christian-ministry quotes on random poems, in the hope that the real porn-addicts among us would happen to see them and be inspired to call upon the Maker for salvation.

Does that help any?
[n/a] francis nor capule › zodiac 30-Mar-04/6:06 AM Reply
hey, dont get me wrong... bottom line is ... i DO not browse porn, not interested in any as well. what i'm into is romance in its true and basest essence. moreso would i write anything that would pertain to it for i do not want to "as you say" add depravity in our world :P . thanks for your insight. and you are doing a great thing.
[6] zodiac › francis nor capule 30-Mar-04/6:37 AM Reply
Thanks, but I was just kidding. The real truth is I just think Christian porn addicts are the most hilarious people ever. I strongly encourage you to see for yourself here: http://www.porn-free.org/masturbation.htm
[9] Dan garcia-Black 11-Jun-04/8:19 AM Reply
I give it a -9- as a new age ballad. Less if forced to rank it as a love poem. I can hear Josh Groban singing these lines in duet with Celene Dion (Yanni on the piano & Kitaro on percussion).
[n/a] horus8 11-Jun-04/7:20 PM Reply
A Parson's Nose By Sir Nudely Of Niggerly


Past your nose you will spot,
a parson that is for you to cot...
and felch for the viewing of the Abbot.

A parson who's always there, never busy,with a pear.
"who will put you on a pedestal;"
The right place for you to be lubed

and twhen tyou're twogwether,
the tworld twould twop,
Uranus shall pull;
and retrograde
and the parson would then palm-aid
both of your nose.

though far apart thy cheeks
Norwegian wood, should arise...
that parson would keep you in their heart,
with his nose betwixt your thighs

querries would be answered,
stains queerly erased.
and from the parson's love stuff floweth,
like mountain fresh springs, and HOT GAY SEX.