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a person (Free verse) by francis nor capule

in your heart you will see, a person that is for you to keep... and cherish for the rest of your life. someone who's always there, never busy, never away. who will put you on a pedestal; the right place for you to be. and when you're together, the world would stop, stars shall fall; time would stand still , and you would feel your heart beat . though far apart and doubts , questions, should arise... that person would keep you in their heart, mind and soul. questions would be answered, doubt erased. and love floweth, like mountain springs.

Dan garcia-Black 11-Jun-04/8:19 AM
I give it a -9- as a new age ballad. Less if forced to rank it as a love poem. I can hear Josh Groban singing these lines in duet with Celene Dion (Yanni on the piano & Kitaro on percussion).




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