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Ramblings of Senility (Free verse) by Lifeboatman I wish that there can exist
Between your world and my backyard
An understanding that will not
Be tempted to address its miseries
In a hollow dome of a well
Beckon then, sweetest of adversaries,
And incant your words to manifest
Truth's most abominable face
Or discontent yourself at the sight
Of a pariah heralding our inevitable
Pizza delivery
Up the ladder:
Washing-up Hands and Disgruntled Underarms
Down the ladder:
War of kites and fireflies
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Posted: March 22, 2004 6:08 PM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2004 6:08 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.286087 Overall Rank: 3747 Comments:
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Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177
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22-Mar-04/7:25 PM
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Nicely constructed, nicely done.
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Lifeboatman @ 203.131.94.18
> Shuushin
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22-Mar-04/7:43 PM
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thanks...
when im 80, ill prolly sit by the beach on mornings and feast myself with the sight of sultry lifeboatmen.. ;) hey man, missed you!
How come I see you here.. been a while...
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