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Eclipsed Heart (Free verse) by Richard
I share souls with the Moon
Feeling both solitude and loneliness
Adrift in an orbit that knows no rest or fulfillment
At moments the Sun brightens my remorse
And I shed my darkness and dark thoughts among the Constellations
From time to time I stand Eclipsed in the Heavens
Darkness bothers my eyes and my tears are blackness
They fall into the void of nothingness and are swallowed
Like the soft sigh my once spoken words of love have become
There are echo's softly floating among the stars
But they fall on deaf ears like broken gemstones against a Jewelers
Chisel
My Heart-
A failed vision of beauty, dying slowly as the Moon sets and the Sun
rejoices.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7838
Posted: March 18, 2004 11:41 PM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2004 11:41 PM PST
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