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Love Before Leaving (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera
Come inside I want to say
But I've run out of charm today
Here's a poem
Read it well
It speaks the words I dare not tell
You're some sunshine
That I feel
As upon your ground I kneel
Loving you
Is something knew
That's keeping me from feeling blue
These metaphors be getting old
I shake my head to watch you frown
Please don't ponder too much longer
For goodness' sake please set it down
Leave this place
Away we'll flee
Where dinner and a movie be
And maybe later you may see
All the words you mean to me
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7808
Posted: August 6, 2005 5:40 PM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2005 5:40 PM PDT
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