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Voted Off 3/17/04 (Free verse) by capachijim
Sing out your heart, There you stand, Pretty camo girl, Sing us a song. Your time has come, And off you go, Sing some and dance some, Give us a show. Pitch perfect, Nuances divine, This is your calling, It is your time. But what was perfect must end, Return to your old life again, The emotional ride, Has come to an end. Just always know, Despite how others may do, That bitch Simon Cowell has nothing on you.

Up the ladder: Sunset
Down the ladder: drum circle

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3636365
Weighted score: 6.181818
Overall Rank: 1009
Posted: March 18, 2004 4:08 PM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2004 4:08 PM PST
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[8] deleted user @ 68.169.177.107 | 18-Mar-04/5:36 PM | Reply
I like it up to the end, which I don't get
[n/a] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > deleted user | 18-Mar-04/9:35 PM | Reply
American Idol.
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