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Men & Forget me not's (Free verse) by Mona Lisa
Man is no open bouquet
And blooms only in himself.
He is beauty fed by filth
Soiled by being grounded.
He has seeds but no roots
Sits in a vase of pixels
Envying forget me notâs
Amok in freedom
In cots of color.
Dressed to the nines in nine to five
He bleeds in to water
Under strip lights barely alive
Bowing his overgrown but once proud head
To curled petals on the filing cabinet
Keen to be admired
Always replaced
And more alive when dead.
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Posted: March 17, 2004 11:58 AM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2004 11:58 AM PST
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Don't really understand the final line though.