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I Wish (Free verse) by tori I can't imagine life without
the one I think I love
he's always in my heart
he's always the one I'm thinking of
I'm so in love it frightens me
I wish I didn't care
I wish I didn't spend my life
wishing he was there
I wish I didn't love him
I wish I couldn't see
how wonderful he is because
I know he doesn't love me
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Posted: March 14, 2004 5:04 PM PST; Last modified: March 14, 2004 5:04 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.7097826 Overall Rank: 495 Comments:
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14-Mar-04/6:20 PM
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I've been there. Why do we need to write in a hazy, over-nostalgic, gushing way to say what can be said as easily and straightforwardly as you have said it.
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