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Free verse № 94237

I Wish

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Mar 2004 · 1 comment

I can't imagine life without the one I think I love he's always in my heart he's always the one I'm thinking of I'm so in love it frightens me I wish I didn't care I wish I didn't spend my life wishing he was there I wish I didn't love him I wish I couldn't see how wonderful he is because I know he doesn't love me

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[9] deleted user 14-Mar-04/6:20 PM Reply
I've been there. Why do we need to write in a hazy, over-nostalgic, gushing way to say what can be said as easily and straightforwardly as you have said it.