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Two Roses in a Jar (Free verse) by Ditchamal
I looked upon my windowsill
and saw two roses in a jar.
Tall beautiful and still,
what beauty and grace they are.
But like my love
they will wither and die,
like a homesick dove
will surrender and fly.
And then all I will see
is an empty jar
that can never be
loved and enjoyed from afar
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Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9215
Posted: March 11, 2004 10:55 AM PST; Last modified: March 11, 2004 10:55 AM PST
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