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the true path of love (Free verse) by butterflymist
lovers weave a path that is golden
simple lies and kisses hold them
their bonds seem saintly so they move to tomorrow
this is the beginning of sweet sorrow
a path of barren destiny
where the show is there for all to see
sense their deepest desires
thus now and as they build their empires
is this for the best
god sends thus a test
be true to ones own
or be in henyas overtones
feel this first
and your lover wont become your worst
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7915
Posted: March 9, 2004 1:41 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2004 1:41 PM PST
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