Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

The Worst First (Free verse) by MacFrantic
I'll give you a chance if you make up your mind Be kind Okay if I must. OK if I'm lazy I'm hazy The news is so bland like a dry club on wheat And my eyes are alive with the light Oh, how right Convention aside I reside by the tide And the worst must come first if you're feeling adverse To reason and rythm and all that is tame What's your name? I'll give you a title A heritage A sign Your a swimmer? How 'bout Pisces? Wow! Just like mine! I'm crazy I know But to hide it I'll show Worst to first came easily Which you'll soon too find

Up the ladder: Forgive and regret
Down the ladder: Today

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 10
.. 11
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8974
Posted: February 27, 2004 11:57 AM PST; Last modified: February 27, 2004 11:57 AM PST
View voting details
Comments:
[5] horus8 @ 24.130.214.180 | 27-Feb-04/3:36 PM | Reply
"You are" not so bright aye?
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 27-Feb-04/7:45 PM | Reply
Sorry, but it just seems like a rhyming exercise; I think most of us here, yourself included, could probably do one of these every 12 minutes.
225 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001