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The Worst First (Free verse) by MacFrantic

I'll give you a chance if you make up your mind Be kind Okay if I must. OK if I'm lazy I'm hazy The news is so bland like a dry club on wheat And my eyes are alive with the light Oh, how right Convention aside I reside by the tide And the worst must come first if you're feeling adverse To reason and rythm and all that is tame What's your name? I'll give you a title A heritage A sign Your a swimmer? How 'bout Pisces? Wow! Just like mine! I'm crazy I know But to hide it I'll show Worst to first came easily Which you'll soon too find

horus8 27-Feb-04/3:36 PM
"You are" not so bright aye?




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