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Jonquils, daffydils (Free verse) by fevriere
This morning,
there's No sugar-coloured blossoms, nor my own Superman.
Spring is selfish, and a show-off.
I alone wear a miniskirt, a brave offering against
The death-grey sky, for the sun I hope for underneath
Too,
I remember Paris in October
I remember how pale the city lay
At the feet of the white temple
The cells of the city
Milk-innocent, echoing the blank
high bloodless Sacred Heart
But
There's
little
yellow stars;
jonquils,
daffydils
Knocking themselves dizzy in the rain.
I shine inside-out.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
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Posted: February 24, 2004 8:21 AM PST; Last modified: February 24, 2004 8:21 AM PST
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Other than that cute, like knocking themselves dizzy