Love that's not true or double-sided

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Feb 2004 · 3 comments

Kinky crime that tricks and treats and never tries too hard runs underground electric, inspires dandelions in my wrists and eyes this paper phase, breeze-waltzing on my grave, fever-pleased and mortally diseased flies, and slowly leaves.

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[10] zodiac 8-Feb-04/8:44 AM Reply

There should be punctuation after hard (a comma, probably) and eyes (a dash, comma, or semicolon). You might change the comma after flies to a dash. Great.

[n/a] fevriere › zodiac 8-Feb-04/8:45 AM Reply

Ah, delicious. Thank-you very much. :)

[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 9-Feb-04/6:38 AM Reply

Billy Bunturd.

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