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Exciting Beer

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Feb 2004 · Edited 7 Feb 2004 · 1 comment

~did i ever mention that i love you?~ here's to you, Sammy James thanks for the New Castle Brown Ale the first weekend of September has fridgidized to perfection until February in my minifridge. here's to you, my acupuncturist thanks for a really good time your energy is still a high my love so anit-evolutionary so unethical within its complications. here's to you, his soul mate and the harness you put on his soul please forgive me for playing along acting like your love was irrelevant like mine was greater than equality. and, you know, here's to me my soul more bare than my integrity flexing and shaking in lusty breath inhaling and smelling your energy and not regretting a minute of it.

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[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 9-Feb-04/6:36 AM Reply
And here's to you, Mrs Robinson.
Jesus loves you more than you could know.
Whoa-oh-oh!!1

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