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Exciting Beer (Free verse) by peaceseeker
~did i ever mention that i love you?~
here's to you, Sammy James
thanks for the New Castle Brown Ale
the first weekend of September
has fridgidized to perfection
until February in my minifridge.
here's to you, my acupuncturist
thanks for a really good time
your energy is still a high
my love so anit-evolutionary
so unethical within its complications.
here's to you, his soul mate
and the harness you put on his soul
please forgive me for playing along
acting like your love was irrelevant
like mine was greater than equality.
and, you know, here's to me
my soul more bare than my integrity
flexing and shaking in lusty breath
inhaling and smelling your energy
and not regretting a minute of it.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7336
Posted: February 7, 2004 4:35 PM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2004 4:49 PM PST
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Jesus loves you more than you could know.
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