poemranker ::The world today. by devina

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Free verse № 85354

The world today.

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Feb 2004 · 1 comment

Serious Everybody is so serious Seriously This is not how it should be Laughter Nobody is laughing Laughter This should really matter Everybody is in sorrow and pain It´s totally inzane But this is the world today Stress Everybody is so stressed Stress The whole world is a mess Happy Nobody is happy Happiness Should you have to put out with anything less Everybody is in sorrow and pain It´s totally inzane What´s wrong with the world today?

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[n/a] andrewjthomas 4-Feb-04/3:46 PM Reply
INZANE IN THE MEMBRANE!
tell me, how does it feel to suck this much?