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The world today. (Free verse) by devina
Serious Everybody is so serious Seriously This is not how it should be Laughter Nobody is laughing Laughter This should really matter Everybody is in sorrow and pain It´s totally inzane But this is the world today Stress Everybody is so stressed Stress The whole world is a mess Happy Nobody is happy Happiness Should you have to put out with anything less Everybody is in sorrow and pain It´s totally inzane What´s wrong with the world today?

Up the ladder: Pain
Down the ladder: Gaping Hole

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9605
Posted: February 4, 2004 9:34 AM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2004 9:34 AM PST
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[n/a] andrewjthomas @ 192.150.10.200 | 4-Feb-04/3:46 PM | Reply
INZANE IN THE MEMBRANE!
tell me, how does it feel to suck this much?
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