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How things should be... (Other) by DeadtotheWorld
Her Eyes Blue Her Smile Great The Distance Bewteen us, Well Too much We Met - Maybe Fate Obstacles Overcomed Rumors Never Spread She held My Hand in the park She kissed Me and she led I make her Feel Good She makes me feel Great When we were at the park She left around five, I left at eight When She comes Again You will see That My dreams will become reality Trust is Not an Issue, Nor is Hate, But love is truly Great

Up the ladder: in perspective
Down the ladder: I love you

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8668
Posted: February 2, 2004 9:42 PM PST; Last modified: February 2, 2004 9:42 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 3-Feb-04/3:33 PM | Reply
Things should be the natural logarithm of the way they currently are.
[4] NanceXToo @ 24.229.216.168 | 5-Feb-04/1:37 PM | Reply
forced rhyme, stilted rhythm, and devoid of a single unique line.
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