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Coat hanger (Free verse) by april fool I'm the coat hanger
in your wardrobe
Waiting for the chance
To see you disrobe
I hang all day and wait for the night
Off come the clothes and on comes the light
I sit and I look, and can't help but to stare
As you cover me with your dress and stand in underwear
You close the wardrobe door
And I want to take to task
Your underwear on the floor
And I am dying to ask
Why I don't get to see
As you take off your bottom layer
Why I'm hidden in the wardrobe
While the furniture gets to stare
Up the ladder:
I'd like to
Down the ladder:
Life On Earth
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Posted: August 11, 2002 7:28 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2002 7:28 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11819 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159
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4-Sep-02/8:39 PM
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Personified furniture is the best thing ever. I have written a series of short, incomprehensible tales about a magical hat and shoe who live in an enchanted wardrobe and then meaninglessly attack people. I will keep them to myself, I think.
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