poemranker ::War Torn by Red Optimist

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War Torn

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Jan 2004 · 0 comments

City in panic Everyone frantic Off go the lights As bombs reign from heights Different factions riot Those minorities can’t keep quite Metropolitan upheaval Malevolent conjures To the mass of brutality So let them moan They have lost their home Men fight for power Others hide and cower As the Reichstag burns A new authority yearns Metropolitan upheaval Malevolent conjures To the mass of brutality

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