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War Torn (Free verse) by Red Optimist
City in panic Everyone frantic Off go the lights As bombs reign from heights Different factions riot Those minorities can’t keep quite Metropolitan upheaval Malevolent conjures To the mass of brutality So let them moan They have lost their home Men fight for power Others hide and cower As the Reichstag burns A new authority yearns Metropolitan upheaval Malevolent conjures To the mass of brutality

Up the ladder: Intersection
Down the ladder: Drowning in a Fire

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.5
Weighted score: 5.941295
Overall Rank: 1389
Posted: January 28, 2004 5:22 PM PST; Last modified: January 28, 2004 5:22 PM PST
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