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A box floating high in the skies (Free verse) by Corey McHattan
As I look, out the window, from the forty-fourth floor
Over the human-flecked, manicured parklands
Past the glistening, glimmering Harbour
and a flock of flitting gulls, in the distance
I see, reflected, the ugly grey steel
and passionless glassy facade
of the apartment block where I sleep.
And when I get back there, after riding the river
of coursing commuters, their miniature tanks,
battling to breathe in the choking brown smog
snaking my way through the motorway veins,
I stagger inside the lobby, the lift, my flat
and knock the top off a bottle of wine.
On my closet-sized, grey cement balcony
I look through the eight o'clock gloom,
the fluorescent manmade constellations,
at the forty-fourth floor office inhabited
through half of my rare waking hours,
All the weekends and friends half-abandoned
for a box floating high in the skies.
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Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8914
Posted: August 9, 2002 9:31 PM PDT; Last modified: August 9, 2002 9:31 PM PDT
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