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A scarce flower~ (Free verse) by clumseYdaiseY
he treated her like a scarce flower
he seeds her in a beautiful garden beside the river
he tucked her wif colorful dancing honeybees
he tasted her in the sweetest way to live..
he took her for a walk in his endless dream
he sang her name and she never be the same
the star above witnessed their first kiss
there she believed he'd be the one she'll always miss..
every endless night she pray
but in every meaningless dream she'd be the pray
she couldn't find an answer so she hides from the star
she thought "he's still a star and way too far"..
so she let him free in his own world
carrying around his broken shining pearl
possibly his glory, possibility is what she needs
there she is bathing with emptiness deserving her creed..
but she still has faith in herself
that one fine day she'll return to her desired path
believing the star is not so far,
cos she still can feel his light shining from afar..
foolish her wasting her tears for so long
she lost her heart, she lost his rhyme n she lost their song
her heart stop bleeding eventhough she cant stand by her own
poor love, he let it bloom itself and die alone..
he never thought a flower might die
he watch her dying with tears held in his eyes
she left a goodbye kiss on her petal and a message on the ground
i'm sorry dear, i didn't mean to let you down..
darling, u know how much i loved you..
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8492
Posted: January 25, 2004 11:56 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2004 11:56 PM PST
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