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I hope it hurts (Free verse) by pretty_poet_21
I hope he knows how much I like him, how bad he hurt me. I hope that
every day something reminds him of me, and that every day it eats away
at him.
I hope that it hurts.
I hope that his friends ask about me, so that I never get far from his
thoughts. I hope that when he lies down to sleep at night, he misses my
presence, and wonders where I am and what I'm doing.
And I hope it hurts.
I hope that he rememebers all the great times, and regrets that they are
through. I hope when he's alone, he recalls the bitter tears that
streaked my face, and fell heavily upon his pillow.
I hope he adds to them, and I hope it hurts.
I hope that every time I'm around, he sees the pain that I can't hide.
I hope he knows how desperately I want to hate him. I hope he knows I
can't.
And I hope it hurts.
But mostly, I hope he'll change his mind, and want me once again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3173
Posted: January 24, 2004 11:55 AM PST; Last modified: January 24, 2004 11:55 AM PST
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