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Thoughts (Free verse) by nicole081083 As I lie here in my bed
Many thoughts run through my head
And every train of thought
Gets replaced but not forgot
Some of these thoughts are bad
Some happy and some sad
Why do I have these thoughts
With myself, I have fought
To keep these thoughts out of my mind
Sometimes they seem a bit unkind
They're always running through my head
Sometimes it's hard to go to bed
Eventually they come to an end
But reappear when morning begins
So I will just lie here in my bed
And wait for these thoughts to leave my head
Up the ladder:
Pedaling West
Down the ladder:
For Mukhtaran Bibi in Pakistan
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Posted: January 23, 2004 9:32 PM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2004 9:32 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3857 Comments:
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titan69 @ 62.31.23.66
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24-Jan-04/12:04 AM
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Im just the same And in the morning im dead?
What a positive plan, you do that.
I think "thoughts" is an excellent title for a poeme! We all have thoughts, don't we? -10-
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It would take at most fifteen minutes to revise this to have reasonable rhythm instead of totally fucked rhythm and to fix the broken rhyme in the last stanza. How lazy can you be?
Thoughts cannot be replaced. They are forever swimming
where the wildbums grow. 247 view(s)
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