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secret love (Ode) by khuscen
lady with the long dark hair don't you know how much i care? don't you think we'd make a nice pair? love like this is so rare i don't know how much longer i can bear to keep this inside me until you dare to give me a sign so i can make you mine

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3851
Posted: November 6, 2003 12:03 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2003 12:03 PM PST
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[n/a] khuscen @ 131.172.4.44 | 6-Nov-03/12:04 PM | Reply
written for a girl as is obvious!!!!
[1] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 6-Nov-03/1:25 PM | Reply
wiccan douche magic.
[10] deleted user @ 211.24.241.13 | 7-Nov-03/10:05 PM | Reply
Written 4 whom ;)
[n/a] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 > deleted user | 10-Nov-03/8:57 PM | Reply
Id say i so this in Male' - before he fucking went off 2 Australia...So it aint fr Aisha. Must be fr the sis of Jesus:o)
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