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Crystal Lane Swift (Free verse) by Matthew Bennett
She's our sweetest blackberry, full of ripe juice; So dark and so pretty and temptingly plump. Do you think I'd be guilty of sexual abuse If I bound her and gagged her and flogged her nude rump?

Up the ladder: My Reason
Down the ladder: necrobos

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7777
Posted: January 23, 2004 7:38 AM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2004 7:42 AM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 152.30.44.39 | 23-Jan-04/8:04 AM | Reply
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