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Judgement (Free verse) by penguin fiend You worship the rancor
It was me that you adore
After your loving labotomy
The door slammed right in front of me
I'm hating your sinister crimes
Aginst my mortal mind
Take me, make it fast
If you loved me you'd make it last
Up the ladder:
My Search
Down the ladder:
It's really hard to know what to speak to him.
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Posted: January 22, 2004 6:22 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2004 6:22 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1788044 Overall Rank: 4897 Comments:
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deleted user @ 24.222.81.233
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24-Jan-04/1:19 PM
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I never loved you.
Leave "that" out of the second line and this is good.
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