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Judgement (Free verse) by penguin fiend

You worship the rancor It was me that you adore After your loving labotomy The door slammed right in front of me I'm hating your sinister crimes Aginst my mortal mind Take me, make it fast If you loved me you'd make it last

Dovina 17-Jun-05/8:14 PM
Leave "that" out of the second line and this is good.




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