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petal soft whispers (Free verse) by fair12
I finally saw the horizon
A first in many weeks;
blue blankets and cream soda skylines,
before increasing darkness
pulled wool over dayâs last light
five oâclock shadows sauntered slowly
on day spent suburbia,
bowing willows showed servitude
and birch rolled back its sleeves
the river, barely visible
through distant maple ladies
and the crows waded softly;
black dots on frozen shoreline,
walleye running just below
there is a waiting in late January;
a time keeping of the light
when we dream bayou summers
settling heavy on our limbs
where soppy March will render
puddled hopes from grey stacked mountains
and when robins march in threes
on white grasses frozen, small
weâll let go our winter fashion;
no longer gather like the crow,
bid adieu to chilled, white cities
migrate west with goose down feathers
until winter is a memory
trapped behind tulipâs soft red lips
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5259
Posted: January 21, 2004 9:06 AM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2004 9:06 AM PST
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Good stuff, plentiful